(none of my ThornClan cats live very long)
Breezeflower Sat down at the clearing bored. "Im going to go hunting" she thought, and went out. Walking along she cought a thruch and a Vole. Satisfied, she started back to ThornClan. She sat down for a minite confused and out of breath. "whats wrong with me?" she thought, but ignored it and continued off too Thornclan, ignoring the now peircing pain in her chest. "ill just have Lioncloud check it out. " She said to herself. As she walked into camp and dropped her kill, she collapsed, a searing pain in her chest. "am-am-am i dying?" she thought. "Li-Lioncloud?" she studdered. "help!" she meowed. The pain was so intence she let out a very high piched , loud wail. Dustleaf wondered out confused. Breezeflower took deep breaths and her breathing mojorly slowed. "Omistarclan im dying." she thought "i-i cant be dying." she said. and another searing pain hit her chest. Then she felt as if her heart had just exploded and everything wnt black. She opened her eyes and her vision was blurry. She looked down and then saw her limp dead body, and cats now emerging from their dens realizing she was dead. She stood up and the pain was gone. Stary figures surrounded her. "Welcome To StarClan Breezeflower. " They said togther.

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